"Art thou pale for weariness
Of climbing Heaven, and gazing on the earth,
Wandering companionless
Among the stars that have a different birth,-
And ever changing, like a joyless eye
That finds no object worth its constancy?"
- 'To The Moon', P.B. Shelley
Posted by
иidhi S
at
1:16 PM
Labels:
beliefs,
Dreams,
Love,
Poem,
Wishes

I wish, I still had you
Had you, In my arms
In my arms, and never let you go
Let you go, to come back
To come back, and make my life worthwhile
Make my life worthwhile, and live my dreams
Live my dreams, and make my belief stronger in "Love"
In "Love" I am, wish you were "too"
19 Voices:
i like d way u have repeated those lines...gives an extra to d depth of those words...
n keep writin stuff like this n m sure he'll soon b in love wid u too
@ Mayz...
Thanku sirji...
I'll go on doin that....n for dat on...m keepin my fingers crossed. :D
WOW this is a beautiful piece!
**In "Love" I am, wish you were "too"
brilliant expression there!
Somehow this brought back memories...dark yet soulful memories from yester years...
Keshi.
@ Keshi
Hey..!! Thanks for appreciating it.
Memories however they are, are a part of life..and they are the ones which keep alive in us the highs and lows of life.. to make us what we are.
wow...beautiful...i wish all ur wishes come true soon...
@ Sadaf
Hey.. Thanku so much.
HMM....I wish...coz I can just wishhh..
ahhh... now thats poetry :)
nice one mate... take care... cheers...
That was So nice a poem ... I read poems a lot, but read something like that after a long time ... Happy to be here ...
*sigh*
have u ever noticed this...most of the time its usually the people who crave for love who write amazing poetry...the ones who have found love and are in a relnship rarely ever write stuff.
why oh why?
CRD
@ Arv
Thanks for the appreciation.
Welcome to my Blog. tc. :)
@ Tan
I am happy that you like it that much.
Thanks for stopping by. WC. :)
@ CRD
AAhh that sigh...??//
Well.. may be that's coz the people who have have not found it, still have theirs dreams and fantasies alive in them. They crave for the Love which they find in books and Poetry and so there's your answer..Love today is only alive in Stories and poetry.
Thanks for the stop. WC. :)
Left a comment on ur other space... :)
Peace.
@ Kartz
Thanks for the stop. :)
What a wonderful bit of longing.
I have felt these words many times in my life but I am now at a point where regret is gone. I have no longing in my heart.
Each love was a lesson and I have fallen out of love with all five of my lost loves. Of late I have become more rational. I don't know if this is a good thing.
Hold on to that longing for value beyond money can be found in our emotions.
@ Robert
I am holding back to my longings coz thats what make me hope and believe, dat there still space for feelings and emotions confirms my being a human who still have them alive inside.
:)
It is a beautiful piece girlie!
@ Ammu di
Thanku sooo much. Muah---Love :)
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