"Fallen Angel": A Disgrace..!
I need my will (Life) I need it now
I wish to seek I wish to explore
They say I am a rebel I call them vicious.
Call me a fallen Angel, Banish me then
Set me free to seek that Love.
Exiled from my First Estate
I’d rather fall, than be away from thee.
When I’d been granted free will oh Thy Lord!
I ask you, Why Love for me is a sin?
Your son taught Love to your children of clay;
Why not we, the children of flame follow suit?
Enslave me then, if you find me sinful
Beneath the Darkness, to the Judgment Day!
And, when the Eternity comes
I will be there to question your might – to be granted Love.
To be united to Thee, would be my salvation
And if, entwined our fates may not be
Our death would set us free.
Well.. Friends this is my first attempt at poetry after six years, and I am quite apprehensive about the reviews.
Background: Was just chatting with a friend and instantly an idea was born, it all started with this image, I changed my Display pic to this of a sad fairy or as he said Fallen Angel.
Comments
thank u
Hi, welcome to my blog.
Thank u soo much for appreciating my work.
Hi thanks. :)
The language a class apart :)
Good work Nidhi dah-ling! puhleeses write more :)
Thanks Robert for appreciating it.. and as you said abt ur belief, My belief too remains more on the other worldly stuff..
I am reading the book 'Brida' these days, its by Paulo Coelho, and feel; so much of a connection to it, and I somewhere see myself in the character.
Hi di.. long time ...thanks a ton.. and yes gives d confidence.. point noted..i'll try writing more stuff.
Hi swetie...thank u soo much..luv ya
pyar jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai kya???
waise overall... combination of words n everything is perfect...
it really made me a sense when i looked by my path... life is so unpredictable and when u find a soulmate its more pleasing than anything.... but when the same soulmate gets parted, nothings more painful....
nice job Nidhi....
Hi thank u soooooo much,
when i read d starting i thought lik spanking u up...but Thanku :)
UR first attempt is GOOD...
Keep going on with more posts...
Hi, thanks for stopping by.
thanks, next post will be soon.
I would appreciate comments.
thanks for dropping by and appreciating my work.
i'll surely do that.
Thanku so much...well I guess - U really need to explore my blog more ;p